第一次做的书 玄幻 都市隐龙

第一次做的书，不知道大家喜不喜欢~~~

[ 内容简介 ]都市隐龙

　　一块充满天地灵气的玉石，将一个刚刚因事故死亡的青年灵魂吸入其中，在几年后的一次意外，已经和灵气合为一体的灵魂进入了一个孕妇的身体。带着前世思想出生的少年，在机缘中习得魔宗武功和道门心法，开始了他不平凡的人生。
　　异术超能者的争斗、修为者的比拼，权贵阀门；黑暗势力、世家侠隐，无不一一粉墨登场，

[ 本帖最后由 gerywolf 于 2006-3-15 17:40 编辑 ]

咋没人顶啊？？？

支持兄弟，加油啊　

呵呵，谢谢斑猪哦~~~

感谢分享

dddddddddddddddddddddddddddd还有吗？？？？

做人要厚道！下了就要顶顶顶！

支持兄弟！继续努力！~

谢谢，谢谢，有空就做更多得更好看的放上来~~~

楼主~!这个是连载的还是已经写完了的完整版????

感谢分享～～～～

50以后的呢    楼主啊     快啊

顶可是到48就没了可惜啊

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这书写得咋样？下来看看，谢谢楼主。

看内容介绍好像还可以。顶你。。